Thanks Andy, glad you enjoyed it.
It can be tough to get the mix right sometimes with multiple view point characters. I actually adjusted it because some of my early readers complained of switching between characters too much so they didn't have a chance to get to know them before they went off somewhere else. Oh well.
Obviously didn't know about the typos.
An as for the last point... Do you remember some examples so I can go and have a look?
Thanks for the comments and, again, glad you enjoyed it.